During the month of May, several authors have been invited to help kick off my mystery trivia book tour. Today my guest is literary suspense writer, Jenny Milchman. Read what Jenny has to say about the importance of setting in a novel. Welcome, Jenny.
Whither Will I Roam: The Use of Setting in Your Novel
It might be too much to say that setting is my favorite element of a mystery or suspense novel, but it isn’t far off. Lest this be making some readers scratch their heads, asking, “What about plot twists? Great characters? Hair-raising suspense?” I would like to suggest that to a certain extent, setting encapsulates all of these things, and more.
Let me elaborate a bit.
There are two kinds of things we’re talking about when we talk about setting:
- Physical locale. This could be a locked room in an Agatha Christie mystery, a town such as Louise Penny’s Three Pines, or a trans-global network of countries in a spy thriller such as the just released EXPATS by Chris Pavone.
- The overall feel and atmosphere of a book, which imbues a place with meaning and emotion. That’s how John Updike’s short story “A&P” can be filled with innocence undone, and in the Stephen King movie “The Mist” the market is where all the mayhem takes place. Same place. Very different setting.
Since stories are all about mood and emotion, setting quickly rises up the ranks of factors it’s essential to get right.
Take the above example of a supermarket. How does an author change a mundane place to one that belongs in a horror novel? Well, he or she might start by mentioning details in a way that’s just a little left of center from how we normally see them. Perhaps the steaks are glistening in the meat case. Maybe that door at the back of the store is swinging. Or a woman is reaching for a high up box when her ankle suddenly twists and she falls.
These are details of setting.
Setting is not just where a scene is set, but howit’s set. When a family departs for points unknown—a new home, say, or a summer vacation—the setting may be charming, beatific, or pastoral. But if it’s a crime or suspense novel, the reader knows trouble awaits and so the setting becomes much more than just its physical location.
Some of my favorite novels are ones where the setting is a character in and of itself. The place is featured in many books by one author, and so the reader gets to experience it through the prism of different characters and different stories.
Stephen King achieves this brilliantly with Castle Rock, and he has a long literary history behind him: William Faulkner’s Yoknapatawpha County, for instance.
Mr. King starts his novel CUJO with this line:
“Once upon a time, not so long ago, a monster came to the small town of Castle Rock, Maine.”
Now that’s setting.
Jenny Milchman is a literary suspense writer from New Jersey. Her debut novel, COVER OF SNOW, is forthcoming from Ballantine in February 2013. Her short story ‘The Closet’ will be published in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine. Another short story ‘The Very Old Man’ has been an Amazon bestseller, and the short work ‘Black Sun on Tupper Lake’ will appear in the anthology ADIRONDACK MYSTERIES II.
Jenny is the Chair of International Thriller Writers’ Debut Authors Program, the founder of Take Your Child to a Bookstore Day, which is celebrated internationally, and hosts the Made It Moments forum on her blog. Jenny co-hosts the literary series Writing Matters, and teaches writing and publishing for New York Writers Workshop.
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Thanks, Jenny,
That first line in Cujo still sends chills up my spine! King is a master of creating settings that come to life.
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Thank you, Kathleen, for having me to your lovely blog. Birds & Books has become one of my regular go-to points. I will be out today in a place that's really rich with setting–NYC! But I look forward to stopping in again this evening.
It's my pleasure, Jenny. I wish I could go with you. There's no place like the Big Apple. If you happen by 30th and Madison, salute the building on the corner. I used to live there and miss it desperately. I recently read The Pursuit of Happiness by Douglas Kennedy. It is set in Manhattan way before my time, but the sense of place was so strong, it dove into the novel and read it in just a few days.
Not only an extremely interesting article but one that is of great value to writers for our craft. Jenny Milchman is the real deal. Can't wait until her novel comes out!
Thanks for stopping by, Les. I agree; Jenny is a jewel!
Great ideas, Jenni, much appreciated!
Thanks for stopping by, Radine.
Jenny, you've made me rethink some settings in my current WIP. Now I'm going to go back and rework them. Thanks for the nudge in the right direction.
How nice to see Les and Radine and Earl here! Kathleen, your blog is like a circle of friends. I'm glad if the post was helpful. I'd love to discuss setting (and everything else) in person with you all someday. Hopefully someplace with a good setting 🙂
Kathleen, I was in the West Village, but I'll keep an eye out for your old building to wish it well…
I was fun, Jenny. Maybe one day we can continue the discussion in person over coffee or a martini, in NYC or on the Jersey Shore. I look forward to rearing your story "The Closet" in Ellery Queen Mystery Magazine.
We should definitely do that, Kathleen! Maybe a coffee martini even (I have seen those in the Big Apple 🙂
Hi Earl,
Thanks for your comment. That's one thing I love about sharing ideas with other writers. There's so much to know, learn, and remember. The day we think we know it all is the day we should stop writing. Jenny's blog was a reminder to me also that I should not underestimate the power of a strong setting.
Kathleen and Jenny,
Good blog! Had to switch to my husband's machine to comment though. Setting, atmosphere, tone are so important in a novel. You're so right about this! Setting itself does become a character in the best novels.
Jacqueline Seewald
Death Legacy
Thanks Jacqueline. Jenny always has wise words for all writers.
Hi Jacquie! So nice to see you here! Thanks for taking the trouble to switch machines. (And thank you–again–Kathleen). I'm actually inspired by all your comments to think about another element of setting that becomes a character…the weather.